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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more formal tone would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
You ordered a new washing machine that was delivered with a dent and scratch marks.
Describe the condition of the washing machine upon arrival
Explain how you reported the issue
State what you want the company to do about it
#Product Complaint
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:113
Paragraphs:2
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Dear, Washing
machine
company, hope this email find you well. I recieve
the washing machine
this morning, sadly indeed to illuminate the issue after inspecting the machine
, many scars and scratches are visible. The product needs to be specifically probe
by specialist
. Due to the company private sector, I do understand to
procedure that need to be postpone
in order for the executive to permit the technical experts to percieve
and perform their task. However, I propose a special offer from your company, by giving full refund and also a new washing machine
. The shipment must proceed by next week. Regardless, the restrictions in the contract need to be canceled
.Sincerly, Ms. Peter