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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the main points but lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more formal tone would enhance the overall quality.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors20
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5
Question
You ordered a new washing machine that was delivered with a dent and scratch marks.
Describe the condition of the washing machine upon arrival
Explain how you reported the issue
State what you want the company to do about it
#Product Complaint
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:113
Paragraphs:2
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Dear, Washing
machine
company, hope this email find you well. I
recieve
the washing
machine
this morning, sadly indeed to illuminate the issue after inspecting the
machine
, many scars and scratches are visible. The product needs to be specifically
probe
by
specialist
. Due to the company private sector, I do understand
to
procedure that need to be
postpone
in order for the executive to permit the technical experts to
percieve
and perform their task. However, I propose a special offer from your company, by giving full refund and also a new washing
machine
. The shipment must proceed by next week. Regardless, the restrictions in the contract need to be
canceled
.
Sincerly, Ms. Peter

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