IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
06 Aug 24, 16:35
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise. The formality is appropriate for a semi-formal letter.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have just booked a vacation with a travel agency. Write a letter to your friend to share the news.
Describe the destination.
Mention the main highlights of the trip.
Invite your friend to join you.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Tom,
It's been a while from you. I have a great new from a travel agency since I requested to book a
trip
to Korea last week. They inform me that the vacation
is successfully booked. The trip
will be 4 days 3 nights in Korea and I also booked a ticket to JeJu which is one of the famous island that produce oranges.The
trip
include
a ticket to one of the well-known museum and a private car that transfer us to anywhere we want. The coffee shop inside the museum also attract
a lot of visitor
to take photos. Museum
will provide a tour that translate
the meaning of artworks and introduce us the highlights of the museum.I'm sure you and me will enjoy the
trip
! So please join me the trip
on 6/8 and
I will send you more details.Best regards,
Vincy Cheng