IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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13 Nov 24, 12:35
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, and the letter lacks smooth transitions between ideas, impacting coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You stayed at your friend's house last weekend. Write a letter to thank them for their hospitality.
Express your gratitude for their hospitality
Mention something specific you enjoyed during your stay
Invite them to your place in the future
#Thank You
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:188
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Tom,
I had a wonderful experience in your house last week. And I also learn a lot from your
family
. Therefore, I write this letter that I want
to share my feelings and
thank
for your hospitality.First of all, it is the first time that I live in oversea without my parents. But I do not feel lonely because you and your
family
help me a lot. Not only that, I also learn many different culture
. It can help me to improve the diversity on my future book.Secondly, I
want
to share some specific event that I am enjoyed. I cannot forget how fun play the card game
with your family
. You tried to affect me during the game
by using your hand. Although I lose the game
, I still felt very happy because I like to play
with family
.Finally, I
want
to invite you come to my country. You can also stay with my family
and paly
the local game
with me in my house. And I want
to say thank you
to your hospitality and look forward
your reply!Best regards,
David