IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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The letter addresses the main points but lacks detail and clarity in some areas. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting readability and coherence. The structure could be improved for better logical flow.

Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors21
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource7
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response5
Question
You used a travel booking website for the first time and had a mixed experience. Write a letter to your friend describing what happened.
Describe the website and what you booked
Explain both the positive and negative aspects of the experience
Share your thoughts on whether you would use the site again
#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:126
Paragraphs:5
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Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
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Dear Tisha,
It has been a long time since
i
saw
you
hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter today to share my recent experience with a website named as Flair.
com
as
l
used it to book my recent flight to Edmonton. It has been a mixture of both positive and negative feelings as
l
was not fully satisfied with their offerings. A good price was offered by them
but
were unable to provide the boarding pass in the digital wallet. Which resulted
into
a huge wait in
ttgat
que
at
airport
. I was excited as well as sad on the other end. Wanted to describe my
feeback
on this experience. Will try to see you soon.
Regards,
Your loved friend,
Kirti