IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
05 Sept 24, 20:42
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the logical flow could be improved. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You want to invite your neighbor to a baby shower you are hosting for your best friend. Write a letter to your neighbor.
Give details about the date, time, and place
Explain why you are hosting the baby shower
Suggest any dietary preferences for the snacks
#Baby Shower Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:237
Paragraphs:8
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Stanley,
I am excited to write you this letter
, because
next week my neighbor
will throw a baby shower party
. Obviously
you remember my neighbor
on the left side of my house, Sherry, whom we met on last year's halloween
party
around my neighborhood
.It will be on Saturday, 5th of July. My
neighbor
asked me to invite you because I am going to
be their master of ceremony, and you will be a part of the audiences that can witness my neighbor
's gender reveal.There will be a
dresscode
for the party
. So, make sure you will use something a beige shirt or t-shirt and a white bottom. Gifts are optional, you can only give letters to my neighbor
as we are only going to have fun. For the foods, if I am not mistaken, it will be gluten-free foods at the party
because my neighbor
is taking care of her weight. Also, you are allergic to gluten so you can come and eat the snacks as many as you like.Don't forget that the
party
will start at 12 p.m, and the gender reveal for the baby will be at 2 p.m. We will be having a short fun games before the gender reveal. The only clue I can give you for the game is, blindfold.I hope you can make it to the
party
!Regards,
Jessica