IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

6.0
Overall Score
12 Apr 25, 21:40
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions between ideas.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors17
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Festival Greetings
#Informal
You want to send a festival greeting to a friend who recently had a significant life event, such as moving or getting a new job.
Send your festival greetings
Congratulate them on their life event
Share your festival plans
Ask about their new experiences

Submitted Answer

Words156|Paragraphs9
English:US English
Global Issues:
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Somu,
I hope
your'e
doing great.
On this auspicious
Diwali
I would
like convey
my wishes to you and your family.
I am so sorry that I was unable to attend your marriage due to my company onsite project.
Congragulations
to you and Deepu on your wedding. I have seen pictures captured on your event they were
amazing
. I really felt I should have been there.
By the
way
we are planning a small
get together
with our college buddies and their families.
we
have planned some crazy games to make this event more special. Make sure you are coming with your partner and we all can have some good time.
How are you feeling with this new changes in your life? Have you been to any place after the marriage
.
If, so what is place and how is your
experinces
by travelling with your life partner.
Hoping to see you soon.
Cheers,
Sarath

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