IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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15 Apr 25, 22:14
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Coherence and cohesion are affected by awkward phrasing and punctuation issues, while vocabulary is basic and could be more varied.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors19
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource9
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Community Event
#Informal
You have recently attended a community event in your neighborhood. Write a letter to your friend about the event.
Describe the event and its purpose
Explain your role in the event
Share your feelings and experiences

Submitted Answer

Words154|Paragraphs9
English:US English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Somu,
Hope you and your family is doing great.
I,m writing this letter to let you know about the community event that, I have
attend
.
This
show
is one of the
best
magical
shows
that, I have been so far. The tricks performed by the magician
is
too
good
,and looks real. This
show
is
organised
by our community as a charity for the recent floods
occured
in Waterloo, Ontario.
I have been called as a
volunter
in
one of the tricks performed ,and It was really
good
to be there
infront
so
many people.
We have been to so many magic
shows
in our childhood. This one brings all those memories ,and I really felt you should have been here to experience that feel.
Anyways
I got the details of their upcoming schedules so, we can have some
good
time.
Hoping to hear back from you.
All the
best
,
Sarath Kommineni

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