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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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The letter is well-structured and covers all the required points with appropriate formality. However, the explanation of how the scholarship will help achieve academic goals could be more detailed, and the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance the overall impact.

Overall score	7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	8.0
Lexical resource	7.0
Coherence & cohesion	8.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Scholarship Application

#Formal

A scholarship is available for students who have shown excellence in science. Write a letter to apply for this scholarship.

Introduce yourself and your achievements in science

Describe your academic goals related to science

Explain how the scholarship will help you achieve these goals

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Dear Sir or Madame,

I hope this message finds you well. I am Jennifer Hudson, a student of Harvard

University

currently pursuing a Bachelor's degree in Physics. I recently discovered a

scholarship

opportunity from your company, and after perusing its qualifications, I believe that I am a deserving recipient of this

scholarship

Aside from being a Physics major, I have been a consistent recipient of the First

Honor

's Dean's list award for my exceptional academic performance. Alongside that, I have been recognized in the field of research for being given the

honor

of Outstanding Capstone Awardee for my study entitled, " The Performance of Formula 1 Cars in the 21st Century.

After graduation, I intend to pursue a career as an engineer for the Ferrari team in Formula 1 and with this

scholarship

, I am confident that I can successfully achieve this goal. Given my proven track record of success in my academics and external obligations, I believe that I am a well-suited candidate for this

scholarship

I am eagerly looking forward to your kind consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Jennifer Hudson

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Total Errors	10
Grammatical range and accuracy	1
Lexical resource	4
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	2