IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
7.0
Overall Score
19 Nov 24, 05:04
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear explanations and suggestions, though it could benefit from more varied vocabulary and improved coherence. Grammar is mostly accurate, but the logical flow could be enhanced for better clarity.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You took a professional training course and found the service and instruction to be highly beneficial. Write a letter to the training center.
Explain the purpose of the training
Highlight the aspects of the service you appreciated
Recommend additional features or improvements
#Service Review
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:169
Paragraphs:7
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Isabel Sarmiento and I had the opportunity to take your course about innovative education for elementary school. Thanks to this course, I had the chance to enhance my knowledge about the new teaching strategies for kids. What I like the most was the level of the teachers because they were very
well prepared
and challenged us to do our best.Teaching children is one of the most demanding professions nowadays. This is due to the commitment educators must have with their pupils. In the current world, students are getting into technology from a very young age, and catching their attention is a titanic task.
In addition, I would like to suggest for future courses that students have the chance to interact with students from different countries to share our experiences. This will make our profile stronger
and
it is going to open doors to work in a variety of
places.Once again, congratulations
for
such a great job.Yours faithfully,
Isabel Sarmiento.