IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, affecting the overall clarity and formality of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a neighborhood barbecue. Write a letter to a new neighbor inviting them to the event.
Introduce yourself and explain the event
Give details about the date, time, and location
Ask if they have any dietary restrictions
#Invitation Letter
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:168
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I just moved in this
appartment
last week. Therefore, I am planning a neighborhood
barbecue in my room. This letter will share the event
information with you and it is also a
invition
.First of all, I
a
student in the university. And I am stduy
master of management. This event
is a welcome party for my movement. I was live in other country before, the reason why I move to Australia is study
.Secondly, the barbecue
event
will open on this Friday. The loction
of this event
is in the garden which is on second floor. This barbecue event
will start at 19:00. And it will end on 21:00.Finally, if you want to come to this
event
, I hope you can fill the question form which can help me to prepar
the food. Because I need to konw
any dietary restrictions for everyone. So I can make a wonderful event
for everyone. I look forward
your reply!Best regards,
David