IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
13 Jul 24, 14:30
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are somewhat maintained, but the vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You need to postpone a planned study session with your study group. Write a letter to them.
Explain why you need to postpone the session
Suggest a new date for the session
Mention any changes to the study materials
#Event Postponement
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:164
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing to inform you that the session I was scheduled is
postpone
. First of all, please accept my sincere apologies regarding in this matter due to unforseen
circumstances. My mother reach
me out that was my father is on
the hospital right now. Hence, I can't be there at out
meeting schedule.By any chance, I
suggest to move
our session this coming Friday morning. I will call the building administrator to reserve the conference for our meeting. Once all is well, I give you an update ahead of time.Moreover, there will
be also
a changes
on the materials that we will use. Instead of computer
, we will replace it with laptops for more convenient. Thank you for reading this letter and
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I am expecting a favorable response regarding on this matter.Yours sincerely,
Alex