IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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13 Jul 24, 14:30

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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are somewhat maintained, but the vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	4.0

Question

You need to postpone a planned study session with your study group. Write a letter to them.

Explain why you need to postpone the session

Suggest a new date for the session

Mention any changes to the study materials

#Event Postponement

#Informal

Submitted Answer

English:

Words:164

Paragraphs:6

Readability

Coherence

Cohesion

Vocabulary Usage

Grammar Range

Logical Flow

Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing to inform you that the session I was scheduled is

postpone

. First of all, please accept my sincere apologies regarding in this matter due to

unforseen

circumstances. My mother

reach

me out that was my father is

the hospital right now. Hence, I can't be there at

out

meeting schedule.

By any chance, I

suggest to move

our session this coming Friday morning. I will call the building administrator to reserve the conference for our meeting. Once all is well, I give you an update ahead of time.

Moreover, there will

be also

a changes

on the materials that we will use. Instead of

computer

, we will replace it with laptops for more convenient. Thank you for reading this letter

and

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I am expecting a favorable response regarding on this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Alex

Total Errors	19
Grammatical range and accuracy	10
Lexical resource	2
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	4