IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5
Overall Score
13 Jul 24, 13:47
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The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise. The formality is mostly appropriate, but some sentences could be more polished.

Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors15
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
You need to change the course you registered for to a different one.
Introduce yourself and state the course you initially registered for
Explain why you need to change the course
Request the procedure for changing courses
#Course Registration
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:156
Paragraphs:5
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits.
I writing
to inform you that
I humbly requesting
to change my current registered
course
. First of all, I want to express my sincere apologies for some changes that I want to correct.
I, Alexis Sab, currently registered education
course
, is formally requesting to replace my
course
. It has been decided with my both parents that, I will be taking engineering
course
instead. My father said, taking
engineering
course
will help me inherit the construction company that was managed by our family. With this, I am requesting the procedures in order to take effect my request. I will be grateful and willing to cooperate
for
any additional requirements as needed. I am looking forward
to hear
from you soon, and expecting a
favorable
response. Thank you for reading this letter
and
I am hoping a swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Alexis