IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear explanations and a formal tone. While the grammar is accurate and varied, the coherence could be improved by providing more detailed reasoning for the extension request.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 1 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You need to request an extension on your bank loan repayment period. Write a letter to the bank.
Explain why you need the extension
Specify the new repayment plan you are proposing
Ask for a prompt response
#Bank Loan
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:7
Coherence
Vocabulary Usage
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request an extension on my bank loan as I am unable to meet the original repayment as scheduled. I am fully committed to fulfilling my repayment obligations and would like to discuss a revised plan that would help me manage my finances effectively.
I propose an extension of one month to spread out the payments more comfortably, which
I believe
would allow me to keep up with my monthly installments
without interruption. Specifically, I would like to adjust my payments to 1000 dollars per month over the extended period to ensure that the bank receives the full amount owed.Please let me know if there is any other information required. I would greatly appreciate a prompt response regarding the feasibility of this request
so
I can make arrangments
as soon as possible.Thank you very much for your time and understanding.
Regards,
Amanda