IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 14 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You need to meet with your landlord to discuss extending your lease.
Introduce yourself
Explain why you want to extend the lease
Suggest a meeting time
#Meeting Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:187
Paragraphs:5
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Dear Sir or Madam
I am the client to whom you have rented the Ateca, plate number: 1556MHF. I am writing this letter in order to request an extension of the lease we have agreed on.
First I would like to thank you for your services and the many advantages you have allowed me so far, it was truly a
peasure
working with you. I would also like to inform you that a small change
occured
in my
schedule
meaning I will be needing the car to move around for at least two weeks after the expiration date of the lease we set at the beginning of our agreement.
I am truly sorry for
the trouble and would love to discuss further details with you face to face, if you are okay with it, of course.I am now going to
give
you a date I have cleared in my current schedule to be able to hold a meeting with you. are
you free on Wednesday at 4:00 p.m? If so, then we can see each other at the agency. See you soon.Kind regards,