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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses all bullet points but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks a clear structure. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter's formality does not fully match the semi-formal requirement.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors40
Grammatical range and accuracy21
Lexical resource12
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
You have won a holiday trip and need to request vacation leave to enjoy it. Write a letter to your manager.
Explain how you won the trip
Provide the dates you will be away
Offer to complete urgent tasks before you leave

Submitted Answer

Words164|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
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Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear Sir or
Ma'am
,
I am writing because
i
have an urgent request
to
the company.
Last
monday
,
i
tried to buy a raffle ticket of my town and
luckely
i
won
that
first price.
However
the price is
to
family
vacation
to
japan
for 1 week , I am not
expected
that at all,
i
thought that the price was a car or the money.
In the ticket, June 12th on this year is our flight, I am requesting to have
an
vacation
for 1 week, if you
don't
mind,
i
want to take this
apportunity
to visit one of my dream
country
together with my family.
In return,
i
make sure to complete all of my
task
covering in 1 week so that the company
do
n't
have any
problem
when
i
am there. I do some overtime so that
i
make sure that all of my
task
are
finish
on time.
Hopping for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Edgar Alfonso

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