IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all bullet points but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks a clear structure. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter's formality does not fully match the semi-formal requirement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 40 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 21 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
You have won a holiday trip and need to request vacation leave to enjoy it. Write a letter to your manager.
Explain how you won the trip
Provide the dates you will be away
Offer to complete urgent tasks before you leave
Submitted Answer
Words164|Paragraphs8
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Dear Sir or
Ma'am
,I am writing because
i
have an urgent request to
the company.Last
monday
, i
tried to buy a raffle ticket of my town and luckely
i
won that
first price. However
the price is to
family
vacation
to japan
for 1 week , I am not expected
that at all, i
thought that the price was a car or the money.In the ticket, June 12th on this year is our flight, I am requesting to have
an
vacation
for 1 week, if you
don't
mind,
i
want to take this
apportunity
to visit one of my dream
country
together with my family.
In return,
i
make sure to complete all of my task
covering in 1 week so that the company do
n't
have any problem
when i
am there. I do some overtime so that i
make sure that all of my task
are finish
on time.Hopping for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Edgar Alfonso