IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks coherence and has several grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter could be more formal and structured better for clarity.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You read about a drama course in a local newspaper. Write a letter to the drama school to get more details.
Mention the drama course you read about
Ask about the course structure and activities
Inquire about the experience of the instructors
Find out if there are any final performances or exams
#Course Inquiry
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:161
Paragraphs:4
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir,
Yesterday,I read
your
drama
course
in a local newspaper.I feel interested in that drama
course
.I'm
writing this letter to get more details about that drama
course
.I still
remembered
that how excited I felt when I read the
drama
course
.The
drama
course
is one of the most meaning
course
I've
ever read.Therefore,I hope you can tell me about the
course
structure and activities when students take part in the
drama
course
.About one problem,I want to know about instructors who will teach them in the future.How much experience they have?They probably have more
5
years of experience and skills.Children's family hope that instructors can reach their kids essential life skills.I kindly hope that you will provide to me
more
information
of
the
drama
course
.
Thank
for your time and consideration.
I'm
waiting for
promptly
response.I always ready to give you some proposal.
Mina