IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a clear structure. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter could benefit from improved coherence and cohesion to enhance readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 33 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently applied for a bank loan and were approved. Write a letter to the bank manager.
Thank them for approving your loan
Explain how you plan to use the funds
Mention any terms you need clarification on
#Bank Loan
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:176
Paragraphs:7
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir,
This is to inform you that my
loan
has been approved recently and
thank you very much for your assistance.I really appreciated your team for everything you all done and given me the
loan
in a recent time period. As you know
the loan
i
applied because of my fathers
heart surgery and also i
faced many financial difficuties
on this period. Therefore, im
so gratefull
to having
such a great team and assist me as a family member. This is my first loan
application done with your bank and one of my friend
recommend your bank because of the amazing
service. I also recommend your bank to others
and already informed you.Onething needs to be
clariffied
which is the time period of deduction. As i
have already mentioned on
the letters but i
receive
a letter today and mentioned twelve month
consecutivly
,but i
requested fifteen months.Again, I appreciated the service given to me and many thanks to all of you.
Sorry for
inconvienience
cause from my side.Best Regards,