IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
14 Aug 24, 08:50
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise to improve clarity and formality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You recently had furniture delivered, but some pieces are missing. Write a letter to the furniture store.
Describe the furniture order
Explain what pieces are missing
Request a resolution
#Service Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:155
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Mam,
I recently had placed an order from your Ikea website on 5th august and my order number was 5377835. The delivery has been made and after receiving the product when I attempted to assemble the wardrobe I was unable to find some of the pieces.
Due to these missing objects, I am delayed on my
plan
which is an inconvenience and frustrating for me. I am looking for a resolution because of this issue. Just mentioning the details of the missing parts to make it easy for you to abide me with some alternates. So, there are two shelves and the top of the closet which needs to be arranged.Please provide me with the missing products as well as the compensation or refund for this inappropriate product assessment before delivery. I would really appreciate your input to provide a solution, as it is not a satisfactory service.
Your's Sincerely,
Kirti