IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 6

6.0
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14 Aug 24, 08:50
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The letter addresses the main points but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise to improve clarity and formality.

Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
You recently had furniture delivered, but some pieces are missing. Write a letter to the furniture store.
Describe the furniture order
Explain what pieces are missing
Request a resolution
#Service Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:155
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Mam,
I recently had placed an order from your Ikea website on 5th august and my order number was 5377835. The delivery has been made and after receiving the product when I attempted to assemble the wardrobe I was unable to find some of the pieces.
Due to these missing objects, I am delayed on my
plan
which is an inconvenience and frustrating for me. I am looking for a resolution because of this issue. Just mentioning the details of the missing parts to make it easy for you to abide me with some alternates. So, there are two shelves and the top of the closet which needs to be arranged.
Please provide me with the missing products as well as the compensation or refund for this inappropriate product assessment before delivery. I would really appreciate your input to provide a solution, as it is not a satisfactory service.
Your's Sincerely,
Kirti