IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task with clear explanations and a polite tone, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 6 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have registered for a class but need to withdraw due to unforeseen circumstances. Write a letter to the institution.
Explain the class you registered for.
Describe the reason for withdrawal.
Ask about the refund policy.
#Class Registration
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope you are doing well. The French session, I registered for, is going to start next week. I needed to learn this language necessarily as I am moving to Qubeac city in January. I also wanted to enhance my multi-language skills; therefore, I enrolled in your session.
To be specific, I recently got a job offer from the city I was thinking to move. They took my interview last day, and today I signed the joining letter because it is my dream job in the IT sector. Consequently, I have to join my position as soon as possible. Therefore, I cannot be enrolled in French classes any more. There is no doubt, your institute is the best in teaching skills and always remain my favourite.
I request you to let me know the procedure for unsubscribing from the classes and about refund my fee. However, if there will be any online sessions in the future. I will definitely join them.
Your trustworthy
Gurdeep Kaur