IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
29 Jul 24, 14:44
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks detail and variety in vocabulary. There are some grammatical errors and the structure could be improved for better coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You booked an all-inclusive resort stay, but many of the advertised amenities were unavailable. Write a letter to the resort management.
List the amenities that were not available.
Explain how this affected your holiday experience.
Request compensation or a partial refund.
#Travel Booking
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:154
Paragraphs:5
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Cohesion
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am a guest at your resort and I have booked an all-inclusive stay. I am writing this letter to you because many of the advertised amenities were unavailable during my stay.
Amenities such as bar soap,
toothbrushes as well as toothpaste
were unavailable. This affected my holiday as I did not pack bar soap, toothbrush, nor toothpaste with me. And it has become a hassle to me as I had to go out and purchase it. The fact that there were no stores nearby made it more inconvenient than it already had been
.So I would like to request a compensation for the inconvenience of my stay. I hope the management of the resort would look into my case and kindly resolve it with me. Thank you for reading this
letter
and I look forward to hearing back from you.Sincerely, Bella