IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
27 Jul 24, 17:00
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The letter addresses the task well, covering all bullet points, but could benefit from more varied vocabulary and complex sentence structures. Some minor grammatical errors and slight issues with coherence and cohesion are present.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
Your neighborhood is planning a community clean-up day and you are in charge of organizing it. Write a letter to the local council to request their support.
Explain the purpose of the clean-up day
Provide the date and time of the event
Request specific resources or support from the council
Mention any other community groups involved
#Event Organization
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:195
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this
letter
finds you well. My name is Anabella and
I'm
in charge of
organizing the community
clean-up day. I'm
addressing this letter
to request your support regarding our community
clean-up day. My neighborhood
is planning a community
clean-up day as we want to help increase the cleanliness in our community
and to be able to bond with our neighbors
.The
event
will be located on Central Street Avenue at 7:30 a.m. We would like to ask for the local council's help to spread the news regarding our event
. We hope many volunteers will show up to work together to build a safer environment for all.Aside from the
neighborhoods
in Central Street Avenue, many environmental community
groups are helping us with this event
. We believe the more support we get
the better. As we would like everyone to participate in this event
to ensure a hygienic and safe space for everyone.I would appreciate your response regarding this
letter
. If you have any doubts or questions please
feel free to ask me. Thank you for reading this letter
.Best Regards,
Anabella