IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
14 Mar 25, 03:34
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion could be improved by better organizing the information and using more linking words.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Study Plan
#Semi-Formal
You are interested in attending a summer school program. Write a letter to the program coordinator.
Describe your current studies and how the summer program fits into your academic plan
Ask about the program curriculum and schedule
Inquire about accommodation options
Submitted Answer
Words200|Paragraphs8
English:
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter find you well. My name is Oliver Guo,and I am writing to express my interest in the summer software engineering practice you offered.
I am a current software engineering undergraduate who has studying at the University of Alberta for 3 years. Since my graduation is coming in next spring, I am seeking some working experience to expand my resume for my future job development. I believe this software engineer experience is the most suitable project for those who want to stay up-to-date with the latest technology and develop their personal skills.
Because of the request of my tutor, I have to meet him several times in a weekly basis. I would greatly appreciate it if you can provide me the program time sheet,for me to prevent conflict of the time between your program and my tutor's meeting.
I saw in the description that this program is located at the 100 ave in Calgray. Are there any residential places you recommended in Calgray? I did some search on the rental websites, however most of them are over my affordability.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Oliver