IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
14 Mar 25, 01:23
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. While the structure is generally logical, the letter could benefit from improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Study Plan
#Semi-Formal
You are interested in attending a summer school program. Write a letter to the program coordinator.
Describe your current studies and how the summer program fits into your academic plan
Ask about the program curriculum and schedule
Inquire about accommodation options
Submitted Answer
Words189|Paragraphs7
English:
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter find you well. My name is Oliver Guo,and I am writing to express my interest
about
the summer software engineering program
you offered.I am a current software engineering undergraduate who has
study
in
University
of Alberta for 3 years. Since my graduation are
coming in next spring, I am seeking some projects to expand my resume. I believe this software engineer program
is the most suitable project for those who want to stay up-to-date with the latest technology and develop their personal skills.Because of the request of my tutor, I have to meet him several times in a weekly basis.I would greatly
appreciate
if you can provide me the
program
time sheet,
in order for me to
prevent conflict of the time between your
program
and my tutor's meeting.
I saw
on
the description that this program
are
locate
at the 100 ave in calgray
. Is
the residential places are included in this program
? If not, I can find the closest apartment
which accept
short term
rental.Looking forward
to hear
from you soon.Oliver