IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8.5 (General Training)
8.5
Overall Score
04 Sept 24, 12:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and clearly addresses all the required points with appropriate formality. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is suitable, though it could be slightly more diverse. The coherence and cohesion are strong, but minor improvements could be made in the logical flow of ideas.
| Overall score | 8.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have a timetable conflict with another course you registered for and need to resolve it.
Mention the courses you are registered for
Explain the timetable conflict
Request assistance in resolving the issue
#Course Registration
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:7
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you of a timetable conflict I have encountered with my course registrations. I am currently enrolled in "Advanced English Writing" (Course Code: ENG301) and "Introduction to Data Science" (Course Code: DS101) for the upcoming semester.
Unfortunately, both courses have lectures scheduled at the same time—Mondays and Wednesdays from 2:00 PM to 4:00 PM. This overlap makes it impossible for me to attend both classes, which is essential for my academic progress in both subjects.
I kindly request your assistance in resolving this issue. If possible, I would appreciate being moved to a different section of either course that does not overlap with the other. Alternatively, if there are any recorded lectures or online sections available, I would be grateful to be informed of these options.
Thank you for your understanding and prompt attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Edward Kooner