IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
29 Nov 24, 09:54
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, with some logical flow issues. Vocabulary is basic and lacks variety.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 31 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:176
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in
recenetly
advertised job in local newspaper for the position of part
time
storekeeper.Currently I have enrolled in
university
for Master programm
in media sciences. As you know
university
fees is
much higher than college
which my current home budget not fullfill
the requirement. My father is only
earner in my family so
I decided to work part
time
to meet the fees requirements from the university
.I have already
expousre
for this position, as last year during my summer vaction
I have worked at my uncle
bookstore
. I have succesfully
managed store inventory by applying digital tools like MS office
and one software application.In
morning
I have classes in university
from 08:00 to 14:00. I will be avaialble
after 16:00. Please let me know if you have time
to conduct interview as per prescribed time
. Hopefuly
my experience will give your bookstore
to grow more and well managed.I am looking forward
to hear
from you.Your Faithfuly,
GHulam Murtaza