IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
Overall Score
03 Dec 24, 00:54
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses all tasks with clear and concise language, demonstrating strong grammatical accuracy and a good range of vocabulary. However, the coherence could be slightly improved by enhancing the logical flow between sentences.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 2 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:134
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the part-time position at your
bookstore
, as advertised in the local newspaper. I am deeply interested in this role because I have always been passionate about books and enjoy working in a cultural environment that promotes learning and knowledge.I believe I am a suitable candidate due to my previous experience working in my school library, where I organized books, assisted students in finding materials, and maintained an orderly atmosphere. This experience has given me valuable skills in customer service, organization, and attention to detail, which are essential for this role.
I am available for an interview any day except Monday after 1:00 PM. I would be
honored
to contribute to your bookstore
and look forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,
Ardalan