IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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13 Jul 24, 11:33
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Your neighbor is applying to a volunteer program and has asked you for a recommendation letter.
Mention how long you have known your neighbor
Describe their involvement in community activities
Explain why they would be a good fit for the volunteer program
#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:174
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to recommend Henry into your volunteer program. Henry has been my neighbor for almost 5 years and I have always been impressed by his kind heart and his skills. He is a very polite and
dilligent
person.Henry is proven has several months in volunteering at Smith's Aged Care where he
take
care about
5 elderly people. He took care of them in the most gentle and precious way possible. He also occasionally cook
for them as they have some sort of meal restrictions. In their free time
, Henry often get
them into small games activities that makes
them laugh, moves, even dancing
a bit. Henry always knows how to cheer them up.I'm
sure that Henry would be the best fit for your company because Henry always knows how to make people feel loved and happy. He is a ray of sunshine that our society needs. Thankyou
for your time and I hope you will take this letter into consideration.Regards,
Mary Brown