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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

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15 Mar 25, 04:31
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The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. While the structure is generally logical, the vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive, impacting the overall impression.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors11
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Appointment Change
#Formal
You have a meeting with a career counselor, but you need to change the date due to an unexpected event.
Explain the unexpected event.
Propose a new date and time for the meeting.
Express your apologies for any inconvenience.

Submitted Answer

Words172|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about a time shifting
about
my career appointment with you at 11 am on Friday.
Yesterday, When I was driving from university to home, I lost the control of my car's wheels, as a result, my car fell in to the ditch. Although, there is no damaged caused to my head or body, my arms are broken.
Doctor
told me I need to stay in the hospital for a couple of days to check the ability of my arm; therefore I am not able to attend the meeting at tomorrow.
I know this month is the graduation month, and your appointment is fully reserved
untill
the second Friday of April. I would like to book another meeting with you on April 9th.
Lastly, please accept my sincere apologies for the time changing about my meeting.
If there is anything you would want me to know, feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Oliver

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