IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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15 Mar 25, 04:35
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety, and the letter could benefit from improved coherence and cohesion for a more logical flow.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Appointment Change
#Formal
You have a meeting with a career counselor, but you need to change the date due to an unexpected event.
Explain the unexpected event.
Propose a new date and time for the meeting.
Express your apologies for any inconvenience.
Submitted Answer
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about a time shifting for my career appointment with you at 11 am on Friday.
Yesterday, I got a car accident when I was driving from university to home. I lost the control of my car's wheels because of the melting ice, as a result, my car fell in to the ditch. Although, there is no damaged caused to my head or body, my arms are broken. The doctor told me I need to stay in the hospital for a couple of days to check the ability of my arm;
therefore
I am not able to attend the meeting at tomorrow.I know this month is the graduation month, and your appointment is fully reserved until the second Friday of April. I would like to book another meeting with you on April 9th.
Lastly, please accept my sincere apologies for the time changing about my meeting.
If there is anything you would want me to know, feel free to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Oliver