IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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05 Nov 24, 08:05
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The letter addresses the main tasks but lacks clarity and has several grammatical errors. Improved sentence structure and more precise vocabulary would enhance coherence and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a weekend getaway and have some specific requirements for your accommodation. Write a letter to a hotel requesting information about their facilities and availability.
Provide your travel dates
Mention your specific accommodation requirements
Ask about the availability and rates
#Travel Plans
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:221
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter for my travel to Tokyo on December 29, I am
traveling
with my girlfriend, our plane will land
on
narita
airport at 1 am that day morning, is at the midnight.After
15
hours flight, we honestly
don't
want take
the bus and subway.
I am wondering do your hotel
have
any airport buses i
can take at that time? So we can arrive directly to
your hotel
after we are landedI also have 1 special requirement.
we
will stay in your hotel
till
third January. I am planning to propose to my girlfriend on the last day of this year, I booked the private dinner in ginza
on 31 December, they are happy to help me with my plan. So i
am wondering if you can provide me and help me to decorate my hotel
room with roses after we leave the room for the dinner? The appointment is at 7:30 PM on 31 December, so we might leave the room around 5 PM.Please get back to me, it is understandable if you
can't
, since it is the new year night. However
if you can can
you also tell me how much it will cost? Including the roses and this additional special service fee.Your sincerely
Oliver