IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
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03 Dec 24, 00:49
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence and cohesion. Vocabulary is limited and there are issues with formality and structure, affecting the overall readability and effectiveness of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 34 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:187
Paragraphs:7
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Vocabulary Usage
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Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
regarding to
your announcement for hiring part-time job
at your bookstore
. I hope this letter finds you well.I am
exceedingle
passionate about this job
, since i
have always been intersted
to work
in such cultural environment like bookstore
. Had i
been able to work
in a library , i
would have done so.
having
this much of passion, made me to choose to work
in the library of my school. It was quite an appropriate and related experience for me. There, i
used to arragne
books and made things ready for new student to come and borrow books. In other words, i
am familiar to
the atmosphere of this job
.An other reason
i
like to work
with you, is that i
will probably continou
my education in Literature , so it would be a good idea for me to work
in a book store.I am
avaliable
every day but monday
from after 13:00 pm
. I look forward to hear
from you. It would be a great honor
for me to be chosen for this job
.yours faithfully
Ardalan