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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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08 Apr 25, 21:53
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The letter lacks a complete explanation of how the scholarship will support pursuits and has grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic, and coherence is affected by incomplete sentences and abrupt transitions.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors22
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource10
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Scholarship Application
#Formal
You have discovered a scholarship for students who have excelled in sports. Write a letter to the scholarship committee to apply.
Introduce yourself and your sports achievements
Describe how you have balanced sports and academics
Explain how the scholarship will support your athletic and academic pursuits

Submitted Answer

Words158|Paragraphs4
English:US English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing regarding my interest
to
the athlete scholarship that you offer. I believe my sports experience as an athlete are qualified for this program.
My name is Nicholas Theo, I am a passionate runner and
high
-
school
student. It has been 6 years that
I've
been doing intense
training
in my
school
. All of
those
training
has given me great achievements for me and my
school
itself. Last summer,
I've
joined some of the biggest marathon
competition
and won the 1st place, also
I've
scored a
new record
on
the latest
inter-school
marathon competition with the "Fastest" Award.
Besides my hectic
training
hours, I always put
school
as my
first priority
. As a high-
school
student, I would have a lot of homework and projects that I have to do. However, most of the time after
school
, I would have
training
until the evening.
That's
why, I usually

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