IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)

7.5
Overall Score
12 Apr 25, 19:57
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively addresses the task with clear details and a polite tone, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
Overall score7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors14
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Travel Plans
#Semi-Formal
You booked a tour package through a travel company, but now you want to change the travel dates due to a family emergency. Write a letter to the travel company requesting a date change.
Mention your current booking details
Explain the reason for changing the dates
Ask for the available options for new dates

Submitted Answer

Words178|Paragraphs14
English:US English
Global Issues:
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Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope you are doing well and had a great weekend.
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have recently booked
tour
package with your company from Waterloo, Ontario to Disneyland, Ontario. Due to some family
emergency
I would like to change the travel dates.
Here are my travel details for your reference.
Name : Sarath Kommineni
Email Address : abc@gmail.com
Mobile Number : 1234567890
Place of Travel : Disneyland, 123 street, Ontario, A1B 2C3
Travelling dates : 23/June/2025 to 30/June/2025
The reason for postponing the trip is one of my younger brother who stays in Newyork has been
visting
me after a long time. As he
won't
be getting semester breaks for the next 6 months. So I
don't
want to miss that
oppurtunity
.
Can you please check available dates from July 2nd week and let me know so that I can plan my travel
.
Also
please
let me know if there will be any price differences.
Hoping to hear back from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sarath Kommineni

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