IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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The letter effectively addresses the task with clear information and a polite tone, but could improve in grammatical accuracy and vocabulary variety. Some sentences are slightly awkward, affecting coherence and cohesion.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors9
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response1

Writing Task

#Lost Item
#Semi-Formal
You misplaced your mobile phone while attending a meeting at a conference center. Write a letter to the conference center manager.
Mention the brand and model of the phone
Describe the circumstances under which you lost it
Request assistance in locating the phone
Provide your contact information

Submitted Answer

Words155|Paragraphs13
English:UK English
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter to let you know that I lost my mobile phone while I was attending our company annual meeting at your conference
center
. Which was held on June 23rd 2025 afternoon 1PM ET.
It is a brand new one from Apple and the model is 16 pro which is a black
color
with a back pouch having Ironman picture on it.
Can you please help me locate that? I have seated in the fourth row middle lane seat no 23. It would be really helpful if you can check with your staff and see if they have any information about it.
Here is the contact details to share any information about the phone.
Name : Sarath Kommineni
Mobile Number : 1234567890
Email Address : abcdef@gmail.com
Address: 520 winter burg walk, Waterloo, Ontario, Canada, N2v 2S8.
Hoping to see your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sarath Kommineni

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