IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the task but lacks formal tone and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors20
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Your neighbor is applying to a volunteer program and has asked you for a recommendation letter.
Mention how long you have known your neighbor
Describe their involvement in community activities
Explain why they would be a good fit for the volunteer program

Submitted Answer

Words152|Paragraphs9
English:US English
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Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter from
waterloo
which is in
mayland
district. I would
like share
my recommendation to my
neigbhor
for the upcoming volunteer
program
that is going held in public square park.
We have been
neighbhors
from the past 3 years living next to each other. He is a
kind of a
person who always tries to help to build good community.
He always takes
first
step to gather everyone for any community activities
and,
he will make sure that everyone is having
good
time.
He will be a good fit for the volunteer
program
because he
volunteer
in all sort public
programs
to make sure he is doing something helpful for the society
and
he knows how to handle the tough situations.
I hope to see my friend get a chance to participate in your volunteer
program
.
Yours faithfully,
Sarath Kommineni

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