IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
04 Nov 24, 21:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety, and the letter could benefit from improved coherence and cohesion for better flow.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have been invited to present at a conference on technological innovations. Write a letter to the organizing committee.
Thank them for the invitation
Confirm your participation as a presenter
Request details on the presentation format and duration
#Conference Invitation
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:170
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you well. Firstly, I want to thank you for sending me an invitation for the conference you organized and giving me an opportunity to present my ideas in front of the audience. I was thinking giving a presentation in a conference but since last 6 months
there
was no meeitngs
held. Now I have a chance to show my talent and hard work in front of others.I would definitely be there for presenting some ways for the technological innovations. I already started preparing myself for this event because I have
plethora
of ideas, I want to share with all company employees. Hope you would like the content and think about to implement.However, I request you to provide me with some details such as what should be the format of
topic
and how much time I can take. Could you please answer my email whenever you are free so that I can prepare the final draft of my presentation.
Your sincerely
Gurdeep