IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety, and coherence could be improved with better logical flow and paragraphing.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have been invited to present at a conference on technological innovations. Write a letter to the organizing committee.
Thank them for the invitation
Confirm your participation as a presenter
Request details on the presentation format and duration
#Conference Invitation
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you well. Firstly, I want to thank you for sending me an
invintation
for the conference you organized and giving me an oppurtunity
to present my ideas infront
of audience
. I was thinking to give a presentation in a conference but since last 6 months there
was no meeitngs
held. Now I have a chance to show my talent and hard work infront
of others.I would definitely be there for presenting some ways for the technological innovations. I already started preparing myself for this event because I have plethora of ideas, I want to share with all company employees. Hope you would like the content and think about to implement.
However, I request you to provide me with some details such as what should be the format of topic and how much time I can take. Could you please answer my email whenever you are free so that I can prepare
final
draft of my presentation.
Your sincerely
Gurdeep