IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
18 Jul 24, 22:09
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points and maintains a formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are considering enrolling in a language course abroad. Write a letter to the institution to request more information.
Inquire about the available courses
Ask about accommodation options
Request information about the course fees
#Request for Information
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:144
Paragraphs:7
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Dear Sir/
Ma'am
,Greetings. I hope all is well with you. I am Megala, Biomedical engineering graduate currently working as Research Scientist in ABC company. Having expertise
of
different languages could help me grow professionally in my organization
taking up leadership roles.When I was looking for institutions
offering
new language courses
, I came across your institution
which has high reputation through my professional network. I am curious to know different language courses
you offer
and would appreciate any guidance you could offer
in choosing the course
.I currently live in Canada. I am comfortable moving to UK. Being an International student, I would appreciate any help you could
offer
in terms of accomodation
. Additionally, could you please send me a detailed overview of the fees for the courses
, accomodation
and any miscellanous
fees.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks,
Megala