IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
08 Aug 24, 08:03
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The letter addresses the main points but has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You were delayed on a bus trip due to poor management. Write a letter to the bus company.
give details of the bus trip
describe the issues you faced
explain what you want the company to do
#Travel Delay Complaint
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:174
Paragraphs:6
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir,
I would like to put your glance on the poor management of your bus company, which has caused a lot of inconvenience on my last trip. I had a trip from Vancouver to Port coquitlam on Sunday 3rd of August at 1 pm for an urgent gathering by the passenger vehicle from your firm, but the autobus service is not managed in a timely manner.
Bus was delayed by an hour from the time mentioned in the schedule. However, after arriving at the station, the driver waited for 15 more minutes for another driver to board as he was supposed to be covering the shift from there. While waiting for the ride
i
missed my crucial meeting and had to face a big loss.It was really frustrating as well as not acceptable from a reputed bus organization like yours. These issues need to be resolved and escalated to the head office to take a strict action and avoid this to happening again in future. Thank you for the consideration.
Sincerely,
Kirti