IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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02 Oct 24, 05:31
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:242
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Sir
I'm
writing to express my interest in your job advertisement, first at all I want to mention I have experience working in
bookstores
given that my father has one and this will
make make
job in the
bookstore
easier, additionally as I am
an
university student, a
part- time
ob is appropriate, furthermore as I am presenting economic problems, I need this job to support my university studies.
As I mentioned before, I have experience working in
bookstores
. From when I was 16 until I was 18 I helped my father in his
bookstore
where I learned how to organize and classify where each book goes according to the genre or category which is essential to know due to in a
bookstore
customers sometimes leave the books
ina
an incorrect place, or if a client needs guidance in searching a specific genre, me as a worker will help them so they can find their book of interest easily.
For all those reasons I named
I am utterlu
convinced I have the necessary characteristics to take this work.As I said, I am a student, and I have certain schedules, nevertheless if you require an interview,
let me know
the date and hour at least two days before for me to organize and check My schedule to adjust it according to Your time and prevision.
If you need any further information
do not hesistate
to contact me.Yours faithfully,
Sara