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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is basic, and coherence could be improved with better organization and transitions.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors28
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource11
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5
Question
You have recently moved to a new city and need to meet with a real estate agent to find a house.
Introduce yourself
Explain your housing needs
Propose a meeting time
Mention any specific requirements
#Meeting Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:118
Paragraphs:10
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Dear Sir,
I'm
Rasika Pallawala,
reacenlty
moved to your city with my family.
I'm
wriiting
this letter to find a
house
for us.
We have 3 members in my family
and
I'm
looking for
small
house
with two bedrooms and one
barthroom
. Even Anex or a story
house
is fine for us.
I'm
Planning to work near the city area
so
house
must be located in very close to the city.
I would like to meet you and discuss further details. If you can tell me a
conviniant
time for you, that will be great.
Our budget is not more than $ 400.
You a cooperation will be highly
appreciate
.
Thnak you
Your faithfully,
Rasika

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