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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
27 Mar 25, 16:53
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. While the ideas are generally clear, the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and organization.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors16
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Community Event
#Semi-Formal
You recently participated in a community volunteer day. Write a letter to the organizer to thank them and provide feedback.
Describe the volunteer activities you participated in
Express your gratitude for the opportunity
Provide any feedback or suggestions for future volunteer days

Submitted Answer

Words250|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. I want to thank you
to
giving me
opportunity
to be a volunteer in Megan festival. The experience I gained while working there is unforgettable. I have learnt many new things about organizing a function.
I was responsible to manage crowds in music event from 7th of July (Monday) to 12th July( Friday).
Initially I was quite confused, but I
really
appreciate that your
team
guided me patiently even though I was new, they explained details about the event and my duties in
well formed
structure.
However, I would like to suggest a few things to improve a contributor experience. First, when I was signing up to participate, HR did not ask me for my valid ID. While I understand this could be due to short-term contract, but I still believe that it is essential for gathering where people trust to served by reputed supporter. Moreover, there is no proper dress code for helpers. I had to search all over the place for one of my
team
members. If there would be a dress code
then
it would be easier for a
team
to distinguish their
team
member
from a crowd, that can help to make our whole experience more enjoyable.
In the end, all I want to say is that “Thank you for giving me such a great opportunity” to work in such a big festival . I hope to meet you in the future as well.
yours sincerely,
Harman

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