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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the tasks but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks a clear structure. Vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the letter could benefit from improved coherence and cohesion to enhance readability.

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Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Community Event

#Semi-Formal

You recently participated in a community volunteer day. Write a letter to the organizer to thank them and provide feedback.

Describe the volunteer activities you participated in

Express your gratitude for the opportunity

Provide any feedback or suggestions for future volunteer days

Submitted Answer

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Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I want to thank you to

gave

opportunity

to be a volunteer in Megan festival. The

expereince

I gained while working there is

unforgetable

. I have learnt many new things about

organsing

event

I was

responisble

to manage

crowd

in music

event

from 7th of

july

(Monday) to 12th

july

( Friday).

Intailly I was

bit

confused, but I

really

appreciate that your

team

guided me

pateintly

despite the fact that

I was new, they explained details about the

event

and my duties in

well formed

structure.

However, I would like to suggest few things to improve volunteer

expereince

. First of all, when I was signing up to participate, HR

did'nt

ask me for my valid ID. While I understand this could be due to

short term

contract, but I still believe that

its

essential for

event

to have reputed

voulnteer

. Moreover, there is no proper dress code for

voulnteers

I had to search all over the place for one of my

team

member,

becausif

there would be a dress code then it would be easier for a

team

to distinguish their

team

member from a crowd, that can help to make our whole

experince

enjoybale

In the end, all I want to say is that " Thank you for giving me such a great opportunity to work in such a big

event

. I hope to meet you in

future

as well.

yours sincerely,

Harman

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Total Errors	39
Grammatical range and accuracy	10
Lexical resource	21
Coherence & cohesion	4
Task response	4