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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

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The letter addresses all tasks but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions.

Overall score	6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	6.0

Writing Task

#Community Event

#Semi-Formal

You recently participated in a community volunteer day. Write a letter to the organizer to thank them and provide feedback.

Describe the volunteer activities you participated in

Express your gratitude for the opportunity

Provide any feedback or suggestions for future volunteer days

Submitted Answer

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Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well. I want to thank you to

give

opportunity

to be a

volunteer

in Megan festival. The experience I gained while working is unforgettable. I have learnt many new things about

organising

event

I was responsible to manage crowds in music

event

from 7th of July (Monday) to 12th July( Friday).

Initially

I was quite confused, but I

really

appreciate that your

team

guided me patiently even though I was new, they explained details about the

event

and my duties in

well formed

structure.

However, I would like to suggest

few

things to improve

volunteer

experience. First, when I was signing up to participate, HR

didn’t

ask me for my valid ID. While I understand this could be due to short-term contract, but I still believe that it is essential for an

event

to have

reputed

volunteer

. Moreover, there is no proper dress code for

volunteers

I had to search all over the place for one of my

team

members, if there would be a dress code

then

it would be easier for a

team

to distinguish their

team

member

from a crowd, that can help to make our whole experience more enjoyable.

In the end, all I want to say is that " Thank you for giving me such a great opportunity to work in such a big

event

. I hope to meet you in the future as well.

yours sincerely,

Harman

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Total Errors	25
Grammatical range and accuracy	12
Lexical resource	7
Coherence & cohesion	5
Task response	1