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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
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12 Nov 24, 05:48
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in grammar and vocabulary. Improvements in sentence structure and coherence would enhance the overall quality of the response.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors24
Grammatical range and accuracy10
Lexical resource8
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Work Feedback
#Formal
You have been asked to provide feedback on the onboarding process for new employees.
Describe the onboarding process
Mention any areas that were particularly effective
Suggest any changes that could be made

Submitted Answer

Words174|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Dear Sir
I am writing to provide you with the feedback of newcomer's onboarding
process
. According to the complex policies of our
company
we are
bit
behind of our plan.
First of all, the onboarding
process
has several steps that new
employess
must follow. Such as, Online application , Interview, Drug test, Medical
check
, Background
check
, etc. As we closely work with youngsters we have to go through
applicants
child vulnerability
check
as well. After all these
done
they can join our team.
The particular area affected by this
process
is the counselling section for kids. As our new hired is for minor counsellings. Due to short
staff
we have to do some extra arrangements meanwhile they are in
process
.
In my opinion we can
make this
process
faster
or there could be some
expidation
process
. For example, we can talk to the background
check
authorties
to fasten the
process
. As per my
knowldge
that
is the only section which takes extra time.
I hope we will see our new employees soon!
Sincerely
Dom

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