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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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The letter addresses the job application but lacks clarity and coherence. There are several grammatical errors and the vocabulary is limited, affecting the overall readability and formality of the letter.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors25
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response7

Writing Task

#Job Application
#Formal
You want to apply for a job at a travel agency. Write a letter to the agency manager.
State the job you are applying for
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe your relevant experience and skills

Submitted Answer

Words141|Paragraphs7
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sir.
I am writing in response to your advertisement, Im looking for a job application which
your's
might be the one I am looking for, recently I graduated from university
and
I am applying for a middle-time job while I Finish my art
bachalor
, however, this
bachalor
will not
alterate
the schedule given by the
bookstore
.
As already
mentioned
I graduated with a degree in literature and arts which could serve as support when working in the
library, therefore,
this can be useful to me when it comes to advising people who visit the
Bookstore
As far as I
know
you do the interviews on the weekdays
, however,
I am only available on the
next week friday
due to some personal matters which I have to attend to.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Daniel Murtinez

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