IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the job application but lacks clarity and coherence. There are several grammatical errors and the vocabulary is limited, affecting the overall readability and formality of the letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 7 |
Question
You want to apply for a job at a travel agency. Write a letter to the agency manager.
State the job you are applying for
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe your relevant experience and skills
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:141
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Sir.
I am writing in response to your advertisement, Im looking for a job application which
your's
might be the one I am looking for, recently I graduated from university
and
I am applying for a middle-time job while I Finish my art
bachalor
, however, this
bachalor
will not
alterate
the schedule given by the
bookstore
.
As already
mentioned
I graduated with a degree in literature and arts which could serve as support when working in the library, therefore,
this can be useful to me when it comes to advising people who visit the Bookstore
As far as I
know
you do the interviews on the weekdays, however,
I am only available on the next week friday
due to some personal matters which I have to attend to.I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Daniel Murtinez