IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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08 Aug 24, 09:37
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You are getting married and want to invite your childhood neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor.
Provide details about the wedding date and place
Share why their presence is important
Include information about any pre-wedding events
#Wedding Invitation
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:134
Paragraphs:3
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Sarita,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you after so long as my weeding has been fixed and
i
heartly
invite you through this letter.The wedding is going to take place
in
the Hotel Annapurna at
august
10,2024
from sharp 9:am. I am very eager ly
waiting for your presence as we have a lot memories
to cherish about since childhood. I want this chapter of life also to be celebrated together . so
please come 2-3
days earlier than my weeding as per your convienence
as i
have planned for pre wedding events on August 8. There will be heena
putting compettition
followed by sangeet
and photoshoot with varieties of menus. I dont
want you to miss my big day. Hope to see you soon .