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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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07 Apr 25, 06:37
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The letter addresses the task but lacks formality and contains numerous grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by awkward phrasing and lack of clear structure, while vocabulary is limited and informal.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors40
Grammatical range and accuracy15
Lexical resource19
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Rental Extension
#Formal
You are currently renting an apartment and your lease is about to expire. You wish to extend your rental agreement.
Explain why you want to extend the lease
Request the extension
Specify the duration of the extension you would like

Submitted Answer

Words155|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Dear Rose,
Good Day, it
been
3 years since
i
rented your
cozy
apartment
.
Ive
been here during my ups and downs moments. I
felt
comfortable, relax and safe whenever
i
stay in this
apartment
.
Also
,
its
very
convient
for me
going
to work because
its
very
near,
i
can walk whenever
i
want and when
im
in a hurry
i
also
ride a motorcycle.
And now
im
hoping to
atleast
extend my lease. Since,
i
grow
up as an introvert
person
it
very
hard for me to get a new
one
especially adjusting to the new environment. I
dont
have time
also
to find a new
apartment
because my days are
very
loaded
even my weekends.
Furthermore, Im pleasing you to extend my lease for
atleast
3 years.
I'll
promise
i
will be a good tenant and a good
payeer
.
Also
, please consider this letter and grant my request, thank you
very
much.

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