IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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25 Mar 25, 13:38
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks some coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the logical flow could be improved for better clarity.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Job Application
#Formal
You have recently graduated and are looking for a job. Write a letter to a company you are interested in working for.
Introduce yourself and your background
Explain why you are interested in the company
Describe how your skills and education make you a suitable candidate
Request an opportunity to discuss your application further
Submitted Answer
Words196|Paragraphs10
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Dear Recruitement officer,
My name is Oluwatofunmi Ogunsina. I am a graduate of Federal University of Agriculture, Abeokuta, where
i
studies Accounting. I am a Chartered Banker with over half a decade experience in the financial industry. I have worked in top financial organisations
in Nigeria, where I have made invaluable contributions to the growth of these firms
I recently saw the advert for the vacate position of a financial Analyst in your
organisation
. This advert prompted me to do a background check on your firm
and I can confirm that my career objectives and personal values aligns with those of your firm
.I am a
result oriented
person with detailed analytical skills. I am also a certified data analysts with vast knowledge in discourse around investment and data management. Asides my quantitative skill set, I am a team player with high emotional intelligence qoutient
and I believe I will be a good addition to your firm
.Below is my contact details and I hope to get an
oppurtunity
to further discuss my application with the recruitement
manager.Email: Oluwatitofunmiloba@gmail.com.
Contact Details: 122378980123.
I hope to
here
from you soon.Yours faithfully,
Oluwatofunmi G.