IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
04 Nov 24, 02:05
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains grammatical errors such as 'conjusted' and 'anf'. Coherence and cohesion are affected by abrupt transitions and lack of clear paragraphing. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have moved to a new house and want to inform your relative.
Describe the new house and its features
Explain why you moved to this new place
Invite your relative to visit
#New Home Notice
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:157
Paragraphs:5
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Dear Raja,
It's been so long, I
haven't get
anything from your side. I hope this letter finds you fit anf
fine. As you know, I got job
offer in my field in Delhi a year ago and then shifted to a rental place because of transportation. Now, my parents decided to live and spend sometime with me at my place, but that place was only for 1 people and felt quite conjusted
there. I bought my home 6 months ago in the same street, its 2 storey
house with two bathrooms with big
dinning and balcony area made with modern architecture.I organized a small party for reunion on 20 December 2024 at my residence at 20 Petworth
rd
, Delhi, would love to invite you to come to my sweet home and give me blessing. Moreover, will spend a leisure time together under a one roof and create memories.See you soon,
Preetpal Kaur